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Travel writing

3 December 2009

Writing travel articles

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A good travel article is shaped like a good short story, with a clear beginning, middle and end.
(Don George, The Lonely Planet Guide to Travel Writing)

  • not necessarily in chronological order
  • may be structured around a theme or a narrative
  • thematic pieces are less chronological

The beginning (1st half of 1/3)

  • The doorway to the story
  • Sets the story’s scene
  • Where we are
  • Why we’re there
  • The quest / challenge ahead of us
  • The theme of the piece
  • The ‘characters’ who will accompany us or we will encounter
  • Must ‘hook’ reader
  • Set ‘active questions’ – tempts reader to want to know more
  • May jump straight into the action – medias res (in the middle of things)
  • The writer sometimes only finds the beginning at the end!

The middle (2/3 of story)

  • The long and winding road
  • Destination is brought alive for the reader
  • The writer’s experience is a filter / conduit for the reader to vicariously experience the place – use all the senses!
  • If thematic structure used: ascending series of examples reaching overriding point
  • If narrative: chronological series of anecdotal incidents that embody the angle you have chosen (eg the delights of Cantonese cooking)
  • Choose incidents that bring the point / angle to life.
  • Keeping with the short story analogy, the middle should rise in tension to a dramatic / thematic climax.

The end

  • Bring the focus of the story to a satisfying conclusion
  • The aftermath of the climax
  • A reflection on the inner experience; lessons learnt etc
  • A summing up of whether or not goals / expectations have been achieved or met.
  • Tie the story back to its beginning
  • Deliver your reader back to the world.

You can read more travel writing tips, including potential markets at The Crafty Writer.