Writing travel articles
A good travel article is shaped like a good short story, with a clear beginning, middle and end.
(Don George, The Lonely Planet Guide to Travel Writing)
- not necessarily in chronological order
- may be structured around a theme or a narrative
- thematic pieces are less chronological
The beginning (1st half of 1/3)
- The doorway to the story
- Sets the story’s scene
- Where we are
- Why we’re there
- The quest / challenge ahead of us
- The theme of the piece
- The ‘characters’ who will accompany us or we will encounter
- Must ‘hook’ reader
- Set ‘active questions’ – tempts reader to want to know more
- May jump straight into the action – medias res (in the middle of things)
- The writer sometimes only finds the beginning at the end!
The middle (2/3 of story)
- The long and winding road
- Destination is brought alive for the reader
- The writer’s experience is a filter / conduit for the reader to vicariously experience the place – use all the senses!
- If thematic structure used: ascending series of examples reaching overriding point
- If narrative: chronological series of anecdotal incidents that embody the angle you have chosen (eg the delights of Cantonese cooking)
- Choose incidents that bring the point / angle to life.
- Keeping with the short story analogy, the middle should rise in tension to a dramatic / thematic climax.
The end
- Bring the focus of the story to a satisfying conclusion
- The aftermath of the climax
- A reflection on the inner experience; lessons learnt etc
- A summing up of whether or not goals / expectations have been achieved or met.
- Tie the story back to its beginning
- Deliver your reader back to the world.
You can read more travel writing tips, including potential markets at The Crafty Writer.
